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ஷம்லாவின் "என் விழியை நீங்கி நீ விலகாதே" - கருத்துத் திரி

shamla

எஸ்எம்எஸ் குழுமம் எழுத்தாளர்
o_Oo_Oo_Osry, thappa nenaikka venda, theruinjukalama enna projectnu....., intha month leave ethuvum illaya.....sry sry hurt panra mathiri nenachukka venda one month agumnu nu sonnathala than ippadi ketkiren again sry:confused::(:oops::rolleyes::censored::cry:
it' k sis..
engalukku intha one month special leave.
exam and project irukku...
full tme class... konjm busy..
time irukkum pothuezhuthi poduren sis..
don't mistaken me...:):)
 

sivahami

Active member
hi shamla

very nice story and the flow is very nice .... but here has not understood this is love and after the revenge its hero going to be affected not herione as he thinks and expects as she is too innocent for this game ( if my guess is right)

only he is going to long for her and its going to be out of his control ..... all were under his control till now and the game is going to be under the contol of fate and herione .........
 

shamla

எஸ்எம்எஸ் குழுமம் எழுத்தாளர்
hi shamla

very nice story and the flow is very nice .... but here has not understood this is love and after the revenge its hero going to be affected not herione as he thinks and expects as she is too innocent for this game ( if my guess is right)

only he is going to long for her and its going to be out of his control ..... all were under his control till now and the game is going to be under the contol of fate and herione .........
thank you so much for your comment sis...
revenge koodiya seekkiram love aa maarum sis...
athukkulla niraiya kastamum varum...
wait and see sis...
and thank you so much for your wonderful comment sis...:):)
 

sivahami

Active member
Neha is also a part of Varma's game plan .... how is she going to be in love with Karthik????? very interesting plot......

good knots .....

thanks shamla
 

shamla

எஸ்எம்எஸ் குழுமம் எழுத்தாளர்
Neha is also a part of Varma's game plan .... how is she going to be in love with Karthik????? very interesting plot......

good knots .....

thanks shamla
thank you so much sis..
ooralavukku kandu pidichchitteenga sis..
meethiya koodiya seekkiram sollirren...
wait sis..
thank sis..:):)
 
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