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Bruntha ( gashini)

Bruntha ( gashini)

Bronze Winner
Awesome story mam, rompa arumayaerunthushu , ethula kudumpathula erukavendiya pasam, kanavan,manavi kulaerukavendiya purinthinarvu ,kathal pathi ellam alagasollierukinga, ovaru characters sum thathrupama erunthushu?????
 
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Priyaramesh

Member
Hi umi,
Story was superb with happy ending.. u narrated the story in the excellent way. U explained very well how the life will be spoiled when we mis understand the person and how it hurts when we show them in a action ,if they didnt done that mistake..Ppl like shalu should published like that only..pavazhla understanding the sarvesh in hotel scene was speech less. really wt a kind of understanding of her hubby..I love ur story..Eagerly waiting for ur next story take rest and come back soon..:awesome::smiley18::smiley35::smiley37:
 
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Kaniramesh

Well-known member
Interesting sis sarvesh baby luv wow sema... rendu pair um so cutr... shali ku nalla venum... epadi iruntha sarvesha ipadi romance panna vachitale pavazha... thendral unkooda senthu Raam nalla theritan???.. Avanga babies um sema sis Sarvesh mathiriye avan ponnu?... Raam paiyan thendral mathiri ???..so sweet of dem?????...Athuvum oru paiyan mandaiya odachitu rendu perum kodutha explation sema?????... very nice story sis... thanks fr giving???... keep movng sis...
 
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Geetha sivakumar

Guest
Hi yazh sis,
Story super.(y)(y) Nice ending. Adulayum pinkie name ku explanation chumma alludu ponga:eek:. Sema.:love::love::love:

But oru doubt sarvesh foreign la irundu elathayum solanum nu vituku Vara decide panum podu pavazha vitla Edo photo pathu tension àvala adu aparam tan thendral ah pakka hospital pova. Pavazha enda photo pathu tension ana.

Nenga inda story la sollirka message social website use pandravangaluku romba useful ah irukum. Photos nala neraiya problems varudu neraya ladies ku. Good message.

Story semaya irunduchu. Awesome. Sikram ah 2nd part Start panunga. Padukarthuku romba avala irukan. All the best for upcoming stories. Good luck(y).
 
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Preethi

New member
Hi mam.As always you have amazed this time also .Nice story .Enjoyed every bit .Lovely characters.

All the best for your future ventures.
 
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megala

Well-known member
Very nice story sis....amru kovam ,love ellam super... pinky character semma...l like thendral very naughty...ram very nice...a soft and hot love story...really superb....
 
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