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கவி சந்திராவின் - "அனலவனின் குளிர் நிலவு..!!" - கருத்துத் திரி

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Nithya Lakshmi

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Super sis apavum pola kalagitinga konjame konjam varutham aAru Rithi ivanga part kamiya iruku nan neriya ather parthen please epilogue podunga sis anga chellam thane😍😍😍😍😍 neenga
 
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Dhiyah

New member
Hi sis...the story is so interesting. I really enjoyed reading the story. Don't take this as negative..I'm just sharing my opinion...I feel the climax portion is not satisfying, atleast to me. It seems like Aaron jus acceped rithi..I feel it's a kind of injustice to her love for him that he just like that accepted her. It would be great if you could add atleast one or two epis with more scenes of them..Just my request.. It's upto you to add or not. But if you do so, it would make this wonderful story even more interesting and gives the readers a complete feeling. Keep rocking! Waiting for your next story:)
 
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SeethaChinraj

New member
ஆரு ரித்தி எபிலாக்கு எபிசோடு வேணும் சிஸ்.... ஆரு ரித்திய புரிஞ்சுகிட்ட Explain இல்லை.
 
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Kirukalepandi

Active member
Nice! அப்பாடி சேர்த்துட்டாகையானு நினைக்குறதுக்குள்ள end போட்டீங்கலே sis. Epilouge pottu scene na mudichu விடுங்கோ . Antihero nu சொல்லிருந்தீங்க.. But, unga anti hero subject 100% nambi padikalam.. Apdi இருந்தாரு உங்க hero.. வாழ்த்துக்கள்! 🥰🥳👌🏼
 
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