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ஷம்லாவின் "என் விழியை நீங்கி நீ விலகாதே" - கருத்துத் திரி

Pavithrashok

New member
Hi sam.... hw r u ?? Ani villan story super ah poitu irunthuchu sam.. sudden ah karthi flash back ah introduce panninga... athu lite ah boring ah irunthuchu.. i m sry.. ungala hurt pannanum nu solala... ithu en0da personal opinion... athuna last ud read pannala konjam ud pona apram padikalam nu irunthen... but inaiku open panna 14.2 varuthu... so neenga story ah change pannitinga athanae....its nice... as a writer ah ungaluku nu freedom irukum... but engaluku story puriyala...atha sonnathum accept panni change pannathuku romba thanks sam...??
 

Lediya

Member
Hi sam.... hw r u ?? Ani villan story super ah poitu irunthuchu sam.. sudden ah karthi flash back ah introduce panninga... athu lite ah boring ah irunthuchu.. i m sry.. ungala hurt pannanum nu solala... ithu en0da personal opinion... athuna last ud read pannala konjam ud pona apram padikalam nu irunthen... but inaiku open panna 14.2 varuthu... so neenga story ah change pannitinga athanae....its nice... as a writer ah ungaluku nu freedom irukum... but engaluku story puriyala...atha sonnathum accept panni change pannathuku romba thanks sam...??
hi pavithra same feeling for me too ...
 

Durga Elango

Well-known member
hi,
first la irunthu padithu irukean good going but last 2 pages konjam puriyala enaku something missing.... karthik kooda carla varapa nehavuku pesura apuram cousin sanu karthik feel apidi soli irukinga konjam puriyala....
 

megala

Well-known member
Hi sis eppa tha full story padichen...semma....super writting....nice story....karthick love pannadu , Shanu varshana thane....pinna nehava Vera soldran..onnum puriala....enna pannan....paavam anithan?????? shourya superb...
 

shamla

எஸ்எம்எஸ் குழுமம் எழுத்தாளர்
Super UD thank you I hope you had a lovely time with your family and friends. I can't wait to read the next UD with twist revealing. Haaaa
ரொம்ப நன்றி சிஸ்...
குடும்பத்துடன் நல்லாவே நேரம் செலவழித்து விட்டேன் சிஸ்...
அடுத்த பதிவு வெகு விரைவில்...
காத்திருங்கள்....
:smile1:
 
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